Comments on: Poems About Broken Things

By: Sean F

Sean F — Sun, 07 Dec 2008 09:28:23 +0000

LOL nice haiku, I’m lovin’ this blog!

Ling — Thu, 04 Dec 2008 15:11:28 +0000

I just laughed out loud at this amazing biku and your latest Smooth Ops advert *if you are an orphan*. WAHAHA.

Michael Feldman — Thu, 04 Dec 2008 00:53:20 +0000

Here’s my submission (not that you asked for it)

two-wheeled bicycle
leaks efficiency. So I’m
late to my next class

snap snap snap snap snap snap snap snap

Jenn — Wed, 03 Dec 2008 23:51:53 +0000

That made my crappy morning.

Bazooka – really?

Kevin Ho — Wed, 03 Dec 2008 20:04:54 +0000

@David:

True. Maybe I could make it a series. Toasters, squeegees, body parts. Who knows.

-Kev, The Virts

David — Wed, 03 Dec 2008 19:39:34 +0000

You’re so creative.

A funny thing is that you could use the same poem if your robot dog died…